My introduction
We are living in a very complicated solar system, which has not been understood for too long. People in the past thought that the earth was a flat large piece of land located at the center of the universe and that all other stars and planets orbited around it. Most of the astronomical phenomena were misunderstood back then; and one of them was the solar eclipse. It’s a rare phenomenon and according to NASA there will be only eighteen solar eclipses between 1996 and 2020. People were concerned by solar eclipse in all ages. It was surrounded by myths and legends, because people just couldn’t imagine how the sun could disappear in the middle of the day. More than that, it was hard to study because it caused damage to the naked eye when stared at too long. Solar eclipses are an interesting event seeing is has great meanings. This paper will discus how solar eclipse happens, how to see it safely and why is it interesting.
Paragraphing
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/606/01/
* keep one idea to one paragraph
* start a new paragraph when
-When you begin a new idea or point.
-When your readers need a pause.
-When you are ending your introduction or starting your conclusion
* Paragraphing (Length Consistency)
-all paragraphs should be relatively equal in length.(balance)
-long papers can have longer paragraphs. Short papers can have shorter paragraphs.
Interview with Colby
What Colby told me in the interview is that he is going to write about "The Bionic Eye". it look like a very interesting topic for this project . According to Colby the bionic eye implant would allow blind people to be able to "see" live large B&W images. I think that's great step forward for human-being . He also stated that its not very common because of its cost. but these implants went successful.
I think Colby made a great choice when he chose this topic for the second paper.
GOOD LUCK Colby.
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